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    Jagannath Panda

    I got this book from a book festival. At first, I was excited because of the book cover and title. I thought my kids would enjoy it.
    But after I started reading, I felt that the book was written mostly with the help of AI. Anyone with a technical background can easily notice the AI-style language in it. Also, the language does not feel suitable for kids. The story has some good and weak parts. I had to read it twice to understand the story properly. The main idea of the story is good, but the narration is not very interesting. At some points, I felt bored and skipped a few parts. The writer stretched the story unnecessarily.
    My kids also did not show much interest in the book, so I felt disappointed.
    My honest suggestion to the writer is: please use your own words and original ideas in your next book. Be clear about your target audience, especially if the book is for children. Also, focus more on improving the narration.

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